Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, February 10, 2020
my top 5 things i did in the holiday
today in class we had to choose 5 top things i did in the holiday.
what would be your top 5 things that you did in the holiday.
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Hi Jacko I really like this blog post because it reminded me about what I did in the holidays. I liked how you have put what you did and who you did it with.Good job.Maybe next time you should add some more photos and a background. It looks like you had a good holiday
ReplyDeleteHi I like your blogpost but it could maybe need some more detail and maybe add some colour because no offence but it looks a tiny bit boring but other then that it was really good!
ReplyDeleteHi it's me Haemo I think your blog post is really cool. Next time you could write about top 5 favoriite sport players.
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